Wednesday, March 11, 2015

MLA and APA practice

Norton: APA
Bullock, Richard (Feb 1,2013). Norton Field Guide to Writing, with Readings and        Handbook (Third Edition
Norton: MLA:
Bullock, Richard. “Norton Field Guide to Writing with Readings and Handbook (Third Edition). New York: Norton 2013

APA
Martins, David S. (March 15, 2015). Transnational Writing Program Administration.    Boulder, Colorado: Utah State University Press

MLA:
Martins, David S. “Transnational Writing Program Administration. Colorado: Utah State University Press 2015
APA:
MLA:
Corbet, Sam. “Text-to-Visual Remediation. 2015

APA:
Baker, Peter (March 9, 2015). G.O.P Senators’ Letter to Iran About Nuclear Deal Angers White House. New York Times. New York, New York. http://www.nytimes.com/2015/03/10/world/asia/white-house-faults-gop-senators-letter-to-irans-leaders.html?ref=todayspaper&_r=0
MLA:
Baker, Peter. “G.O.P Senators’ Letter to Iran About Nuclear Deal Angers White House”. New York, New York: The New York Times.

APA:
Department of Environmental Health and Safety. Louisville, Kentucky: University of Louisville. http://louisville.edu/dehs/emergency/emergency-notification

MLA:
“Department of Environmental Health and Safety”. Louisville, Kentucky

APA:
Min-Zhan Lu (1991). Redefining the Legacy of Mina Shaughnessy: A Critique of the Politics of Linguistic Innocence. Journal of Basic Writing.

MLA:

Min-zhan Lu. “Redefining the Legacy of Mina Shaughnessy: A Critique of the Politics of Linguistics Innocence”. Journal of Basic Writing. Vol. 10 No. 1 1991

Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Reflection# 2 of major assignment .

    Major assignment one was a research paper that required me to go out and ask to find information, and not put my opinion into my paper. For major assignment 2 we did an argumentative paper that you did not really have to go out and interview people but you could if you wanted it to and with an argumentative paper you can put your opinion into a paper. One of my hardest struggles for writing is not opinionating my papers, it is the easy thing to do when in reality my opinion is not credible unless I am writing about how to unsuccessfully leave your opinion out of a paper.
    With assignment one my main weakness was organization, although with assignment to it was a major focus of mine because I knew how poorly I did on the last one. In assignment two I already had in mind that i needed to make a better outline for my paper before it was required of us in class.
  As a way to stay credible I tried my hardest to have all my sources from websites that where sponsored by the government or just a reliable source in general.
 As topics go I choose a fairly easy topic to come up with information on, but one I was interested in. I focused on Originally the dangers and bans of Tobacco products but with further research I found out it was illegal for our government to out law the sell of tobacco. With this in mind now I changed the topic of my paper from out lawing to how Tobacco use will soon be a fad of the past, and whether the tobacco industry dropping off the face of the earth will be okay for the United States fragile economic system.
    Overall I feel as if I did better with assignment 2 rather than assignment one, but not on my own doing if It was not pointed out to me how I had made these mistakes in my writing before I would have written the same way.

Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Outline For Major Assignment Two.

Topic: Are Cigarettes and other tobacco products a thing of the past and is it in our best interest if the tobacco industry came to a stop.

Paragraph One: Explain the down fall of cigarettes in the past several years and why this is happening.  Thesis: The tobacco industries clientele is falling apart and will seemingly be a thing of the past in the next couple of decades whether its the best thing for our country or not.

Paragraph Two: Why the tobacco industry is on a down fall.
Point one: Health research has proven that tobacco is very harmful for your body to consume.
          - 443,000 people die every year in america alone form tobacco use
Paragraph Three - Six: Why the tobacco industry is on a down fall.
Point two: healthier alternatives on the way
          -Advertisement has stopped
          -Nicotine gum and patches help people stop being addicted to cigarettes and eventually stop if               used right.
          -E-cigs have come up in the past couple years as a healthier alternative with less harmful
                  *E Cigarettes don't have second hand smoke.
                  * It gets rid of the most dangerous part of a smoking which was inhaling the smoke form                        the cigarettes and gives you a healthier solution.
                  * all thought they still have carcinogens from smoking the e pins, these carcinogens are                          also found in things we do every day like eating and breathing.
           - Hookahs have been mentioned as a healthy alternative to smoking but are just as bad if                       not worst. most people wind up smoking more nicotine and tobacco in general with a                           hookah
           -Are these things actually any healthier for you?
                 * These things are healthier for you then actually cigarettes or smokeless tobacco, but                             are not recommended because they still do have nicotine which is an addictive                                     substance.
Paragraph Seven - Eight:Who will hurt if the tobacco industry comes to a halt.
          - 180,000 jobs will be lost form the tobacco industry
          - Cigars will still be around because they are a luxury that people will not want to loose.
          - C.V.S alone lost 2 billion dollars when they gave up selling tobacco products at their store.
Paragraph Nine: Concluding paragraph
       -wrap up.
             *Give the call to action to continue the lowering of tobacco use.
Sources
+http://www.cdc.gov/chronicdisease/resources/publications/aag/osh.htm
+http://www.ash.org.uk/files/documents/ASH_715.pdf
+http://www.thetruth.com/
+http://www.everydayhealth.com/smoking-cessation/nicotine-replacement-therapy.aspx


Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Free write on the connection between alcholism and serial killers

    Every once in a while you will turn on the T.V and hear about a serial killer, hiding somewhere under peoples noses in big cities. It seems as if serial killers are becoming less occurring, which is a good thing for obvious reasons, but what is causing these mostly male, serial killers to slow down.

    Alcohol is one of the few things that most of these serial killers have in common. Crimemusem.org even goes as far as saying being a alcoholic is one of the 9 early signs of being a potential serial killer. Jeffery Dahmer, one of the most nitrorious serial killers in america, confessed with his investigator over his case that alcohol was a major problem of his he. Dahmer started  drinking at a young age and started having serious problems around the age of 14 and from there it grew to a whole new problem. 
   Dahmer was not the only serial killer who had a drinking problem he wass far from being the only one. People like John Wayne Gacy said alcohol was the causes of his murder and he killed over 30 people .

Monday, February 23, 2015

Scholarly Literature Questions

A)Johnson uses 8 sources in his essay.
B)She uses proper grammar and and scholarly sources.
C) She starts off by making points with her own work and backs up her points with sources as credibility.

Thursday, February 12, 2015

Reflection on First Major Assignment

     In the process of writing an informational  essay on the expectations of writing in the field of nursing, I learned several things in the process. Writing this paper not only taught me the basics of writing in the nursing field but also helped me refine my writing skills as a whole. 
      As a part of this paper I had to interview two nurses about how writing is used in their job.
Having to do so helped me gain information that a book or article could not have given me, and helped me touch up on my interviewing process. Writing this paper not only required me to interview two people in my future profession but also required that I had at least for sources. Having so made me quote a lot and assisted my writing in giving it more credibility and simply giving me the practice of quoting agin. 
     When this paper was first assigned I assumed that English did not play a big role, or any at all,  in nursing since it is such heavily science based major. I realized once I stared reading scholarly articles and interviewing experts that I could not have been more wrong. English plays a major role in nursing and if a nurse does not make bench mark on how much english is needed to become a nurse they will fail at there job. Being a nurse of any field requires you to write reports on patients, and a heavy amount of continuous research through out a nurses a career. Both of these are critical to the job of a nurse and if done wrong could not only could hinder you from doing your job well, but if a report is written wrong it could cost a life. 
    Assignment one was overall a success in teaching me several things about my writing skills. I learned that I am not as good of a writer as I believed I was. I need to be able to quote better and not write with my opinion but more objective and giving my opinion in my paper as little as possible. 
In order for me to be ready for my next major assignment i need to be able to do both of these things better in order to write at the skill level I would like.

Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Expectation in English of Nurses.

Jacob Taylor


            Nursing is becoming highly sought after job more and more everyday since the rate of living is also going up everyday. Since health is up that means more people are alive, which means there is more need for nurses.  Although nursing is a job that will always have jobs its not an easy job, and takes a large amount of studying and training.
            According to the American Nurses Association “Nursing is the protection, promotion, and optimization of health and abilities, prevention of illness and injury, alleviation of suffering through the diagnosis and treatment of human response, and advocacy in the care of individuals, families, communities, and populations”. Nursing is a job that requires a lot of science background. To become a nurse at the University of Louisville you have to take a minimum of 18 credit hours just in science classes. Although Science is a very important aspect of nursing it’s not the only one. English is a crucial and necessary class for becoming a nurse. “At the baccalaureate level, it is expected that the RN could also write short articles for publication and become involved in nursing research. This would require a higher level of writing sophistication”(Dr. Altman). These expectations are put on nurses because they need to be able to write very objective notes, research, and write research papers.
            In preparation for this paper I interviewed two nurses, one active the other not, the one thing they had in common when asked what was important in there field when it came to writing, both said reports. Bernard Beins, from the APA, explains reports as “… a story of a persons life”, which is a very accurate. Reports are an observation of a patient that will help the doctor or a nurse know how much medicine they’ve had or need as well as any other information needed to be known about the patient. The objective of reports for nurses is to “ write a report that is objective and precise as possible along with being legible for the doctor to read” according to Dr. Taylor.
            Reports can be one of the most important parts of a nurse’s job and they need lots of attention, a bad report could be life or death. In both of my interviews, with Dr. Taylor and Mrs. Combs, bad report stories were told where the doctor had written down illegibly the amount of medicine needed and the wrong dosage was given to the patient. In Mrs. Combs story “a doctor would write his orders they would write it really sloppy at times and it would look like one amount but actually it would be another. This resulted in the patient receiving the incorrect medication resulting in hypotension that required a bolus of fluids to increase the patients pressure”. Even with the invention of Electric reports, which are done on a computer, not all hospitals have these, so it is still very important that nurses practice good handwriting.
            A lot of people believe that a nurses job ends after leaving the hospital, it is not. Nurses conduct research, use research in practice, and teach about research (Nursingworld.org) Nurses are required to continue to research and write analysis after they’ve made it into the health services. “…[Research papers are] a systematic search for a deepening knowledge of our understanding and meant to answer our questions about our patients, treatments and many other things.” According to University of Ontario Institute of Technology’s college of nursing. Researching helps nurses understand modern medicine, and ways to be a better nurse.
Research involves, but is not limited to, going to Research conferences, and reading other nurses, and doctors research papers. Without research we would still be practicing old medicine that is outdated and unnecessary.  Research can be affective as finding out that leeches don’t cure patients to discovering a way to cure cancer.
The understanding of “sophisticated English” is very crucial to a nurse’s job. If he or she cannot write like this it could end a persons life or prevent that nurse and other nurses growth in the knowledge of their field. In order to be able to understand “sophisticated English” nurses need to take upper level English classes, Latin classes, to help with medical terms, along with a medical terminology class. Dr. Taylor stated” nothing helped me more with writing in nursing more then taking Latin classes, it helped me be as objective as I am today”. Nurses need to make sure they are up to the expectation of them. With out an understanding of writing you cannot make it as a nurse.